| ok.. umm... where do i start... first of all, i noticed you use basslines instead of kicks.. no!! get some kicks man, there's no real beat witout em.. those 'stomps' are the closest thing ya got to a kick, but they sound pretty nasty.. drop those. ya strings arent so bad, just not so good either. the lil chime noise is too loud, turn it down... ya main problem is just ya sounds, they suck! get some vst's or find some nice sound packs.. ya just starting out tho right? i'm guessin by how this sounds.. just keep on going, you'll get alot better.. oh check out my beats aswell! |