whiteice15

gottahavmypops

get better equipment & then plug it in & jump in the bathtub.

KushPuffer

shits ight man, you lookin to buy any beats? if so i got you on em man

E2thaC

yeah defintately without a doubt man YOU GOTTA GET SOME NEW EQUIPMENT.. i can tell your using some basic shit.. go onto the internet and download a program called mixcraft.. i use it to record and it sounds better, next go to the music store and pick up a good mic and you will be set to bust up some shit

whiteice15

ha i be usin a microphone from a fuckin video game and usin audacity sittin next to the computer so u can hear the fuckin kickback thru the microphone so thats the equipment i using.

whiteice15

anyone else got any feedback?

Rhap

ok i only heard the "show me where the cash at" joint, the others wouldnt' load cuz of my stupid internet.. iight obviously ya need a mic.. but real talk just a $15 mic will do ya for a while, just need to learn how to mix.. cool edit, mixcraft, acid pro are some good programs to use. cant really say one is better than the other, just depends on the user and how well ya can use the program... either way GET RID OF AUDACITY i noticed it's recordings come out fuzzier than other programs i've used, so quickly get somethin else.. iight ya flow's fucked over lol.. ya need to learn how to ride the beat, ya sound like you just saying random words... try rapping ya words at a consistent "speed" if that makes sense, and for starters have your rhyming words land in the 4th count, which is around the 2nd snare of each bar.. just till ya learn to ride the beat properly, then ya can get fancy wit it.. delivery, like i said it sounds like ya reading/saying it, not rapping.. it takes time to find the right delivery for yourself, but experiment, try getting hype on one track, angry, sad, ect ect just try everything then you'll find your comfort zone cuz it doesn't sound like ya found it yet.. best thing ya can do is keep writing and recording.