Luda The Captain

After listening to a few freestyles and tracks I've made, I've come to a conclusion. I suck and I can't make a decent track if my life depended on it. Why?

1. I can't enunciate words correctly. If you listen to my tracks, you can barely understand what I am saying. For some reason I can't say two words quicky without dragging the first word for a little while, and it comes out horrible, no matter how many times I rerecord a track.

2. I have absolutely no flow whatsoever.

3. My tracks are boring. I sound dead when I am rapping. You'd probably fall asleep in the middle of my tracks or start a random conversation while listening.

4. I mumble/studder a lot.

5. I'm often off beat.

6. My voice is very low, yet I still sound like a kid. I can't seem to work with that correctly.

7. We all know I need a new name. My current one is too close to Ludacris.


What exactly do I need from you guys? I need you to listen to all of my songs, and then tell me what is wrong with me and how I can fix these problems. I REALLY want to become a better rapper than what I am. My team member makes me look like crap on the tracks. Plus, our group album is going to drop in like a month. I don't want to sound like shit on it.

You can find my tracks here:
Luda The Captain Music Profile on IMEEM
MySpace.com - Luda The Captain (NEW DAX STAR DISS UP) - SPRINGFIELD, Massachusetts - Hip Hop / R&B - www.myspace.com/ludathecaptain

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Check out my MySpace page for more tracks and updates concerning my album!

http://www.myspace.com/ludathecaptain

If you would like to do a collaboration with me, send me a message on this forum, or through MySpace.

Los Kid

well i listened to "what i am" and it really isn't great man. you have NO enthusiasim at all, and the quality is horrible. but to tell you the truth i really wasn't good at rappin for a WHILE so just keep practicing and practicing and if yu got talent it'll show eventually. but yo can you peep my "its alright" track wit O*Zee and tell me what you think. good looks.

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Luda The Captain

"What I Am" was the worst track I ever made. That was my first time using my mic, so I was WAY too close to it. You should listen to a different one.

But what about my flow and my lyrics? What do you think I should improve on with those?

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Check out my MySpace page for more tracks and updates concerning my album!

http://www.myspace.com/ludathecaptain

If you would like to do a collaboration with me, send me a message on this forum, or through MySpace.

SiR E.U

u aint all dat bad..just make whatever your strong suit is the best suit..get me?

SaintPR

oh so when i said it you got mad, but nowwwww...

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edub09

Your 15 years old...you have a lot of time to improve...Noone is nice when they first start...

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SiR E.U

btw,i mumble and stutter.i hide it real well tho.
an put some base in ya voice,i sounded like a kid 2.

man im talkin like i aint 15 or somethin..