lil freestyle i just did - RRT

LPBeats88 · 07-28-2007, 12:52 PM

the block's strugglin' they tryna keep the lights on/
plus niggas movin' weight all day to get paid/
and i ain't mad them niggas cause they gotta get they money/
but when the cops come around them boys start actin' funny/
and the girls start trippin' over the bills for real/
but they get they nails did every muh-fuckin' week/
then homie and his broad get up and start clockin/
i know my verse didn't rhyme but i still got ya head bobbin'/

i know it's sorry but i was goin' 2 a old Wu-Tang beat and started floin' like em. lol

theproject · 07-30-2007, 08:57 AM

for 1 u got a aftermath display pic or watever n they droppin the ball especially since eminems new shit is garbage, n u must be high as fuck postin that lol

D-Dot-Z · 08-02-2007, 05:23 PM

wow
thats horrible
half of it dont rhyme
the structure is shitty
go buy frankie wainwrights notebook from him
he at dorchester
you prollly know of him
go cop that lmfao

chillam · 08-02-2007, 06:27 PM

its aite

**DipsDaDon** · 08-02-2007, 06:28 PM

Shit was terrible i know u can do betta than dat

D-Dot-Z · 08-02-2007, 10:54 PM

no
no
he cant

pointblank · 08-02-2007, 11:42 PM

sry man but tha freestyle is weak

LPBeats88 · 08-03-2007, 06:30 AM

i know this shit was weak/wack/sorry/shitty/fucked/bad, lol but like i said it was sorta like an ODB freestyle, i had it on my iTunes he freestyled and no line rhymed, i thought his shit was tight but obviously my shit sucked.

LPBeats88 · 08-03-2007, 06:34 AM

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Originally Posted by theproject

for 1 u got a aftermath display pic or watever n they droppin the ball especially since eminems new shit is garbage, n u must be high as fuck postin that lol

wow, that's an awesome cutdown, i don't think i've ever heard anything so funny, man i don't think i'm gonna heal that wound u just left me, man ur a beast u slay me with ur creativity, and let's not forget the delivery, i especially like the way u said they're droppin' like flies or somethin' like that, but anyway was that all? i mean was that the joke? cuz if so that was awesome, man i'm tellin' u man u should be writin' jokes for like scrubs or somethin'....................