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08-22-2008, 09:39 PM
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  |  Take on racism Just a quick take on police racism.. enjoy. I don't think it's good, i just shit it outta my head and wrote it in a minute. Flying right over the blind on city skyline Gathering people ravenous around a dead mind Get with the times, cause this is how shit go You can't know until on you they empty they ammo And on it go, five-o gonna find the victim body To blame it on someone to which killin' is a hobby The muthafucka headin' jail to serve mad time Another nigga takin' regular white man's shine Cause niggas handle the gun better or so they say I'm not black nor white, I'm in the shades of grey And I still think this shit we shouldn't see everyday So if you ain't got proof then get the fuck out my way
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08-28-2008, 01:54 PM
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| no muthafuckin feed? cmooooooon
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08-28-2008, 02:27 PM
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 | gotta feed to get feed
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08-31-2008, 02:49 AM
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| i feed more than i drop man..
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08-31-2008, 03:26 PM
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| word, this is pretty hard, you should have continued to really display the message you sendin, cuz u was doin a good job
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09-02-2008, 12:09 AM
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| thx, will work on it man.
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09-02-2008, 09:35 AM
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| Hey Gagonov. I like the concept in the text. The Structure is okay but the rhyme and flow is awesome. Keep it up i want to see more.  |
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09-02-2008, 10:34 AM
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| thx!
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