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when i first met you i was lost for werds/
i dont even wanna remember what occured/
all i know is that i was mumbling/
cat had my tongue pussy had my speech stumbling/
now im sitting here thinkin bout that shit/
we tight now i mustve sed something legit/
i dont even know if igot a werd in edgewise/
but u was with me and blowin off them guys/
i was feelin like the werld was below me/
and not even a remote could control me/
but now you gone and im just reminicin/
bout how we met and all the werds were missin/
looks like i found em and i gave em to you/
cuz u thetype of chick i could get attached to/
thats true when its come down to it i cant lie/
you left me here with just that single goodbye/


hook should be here


you gave me one chance and i took full advantage/
i threw more game than joe torre could manage/
and it was cool cuz u threw it right back/
some championship playin just hand us the plaque/
and let us be the ones that all these people envy/
you can be the model n imma be the emcee/
so that i got a reason to write you all these songs/
and for you to know my arms are where you belong/
so drop all ya other plans an lets go somewhere/
n if u do then i really know you care/
we aint gotta plan this out a week before/
cuz i know you'd b down if i knocked on ya door/


hook should be here


i see you daily and thats just how it should be/
im like a plant wit no water when u aint wit me/
its like life is just so incomplete/
like mid july witout the summers heat/
thats why im there when you need me most/
and u there for me when everybody's ghost/
so lets go hit a movie, do something together/
me n u make it rain we predict the weather/
not even channel 4 could do it any better/
so when it starts to pour i'll give u that umbrella/
i'll stay in the rain for hours if that what it takes/
cuz a little water aint gonna ruin this date/


hook should be here

feed appreciated peeeople

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D-Dot-Z

damn, 14 fuckin views n not one reply, wat is this? nobody leaves criticism or props no more?

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theFRANCHISE

I'm really feeling that. I remember I used to be able to write like that since I wrote R&B-type lyrics when I first started rapping and sweet-talking used to be my thing.

Honestly, I wish I could still write like that. But battling in the Fight Club changed my style and watered down my versatility a bit, so writing R&B isn't as easy as it used to be.

But keep it up, though. I might be able to help you come up with a hook at some point if I get around to writing another R&B track in the next week or so.

D-Dot-Z

actually homie, i just threw an ashanti acapella on it, sounds good, flows, so iz all good

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Lyrikal.genius

I'M MOST DEF FEELIN THAT

D-Dot-Z

haha thanks homie

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realwitit

verses str8 i got a hook 4 u holla at your boy and i'll spit it 4 u bwitdacrown

D-Dot-Z

shits ooooolllldddd sonn. i got a chorus now... its already goin on the mixtape an all man
appreciate it though

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