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**theFRANCHISE** · 02-08-2007, 08:55 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Krackerjack

You want me to stop dissing because I have got better and I just ripped you and that other guy. The Franchise damn this man is a killer, someone put some water on him. Anyway.

The first time your beat me was because I had no prepresence
your raps are something like your plate where's the substance
For the way that I'm shining on you I deserve a crescent
Thats a chain if you didn't know theres a vocab lesson
Damn I'm getting good I should make this my profession
If we battled again you wouldn't win in succession.

Where is Amurdoc?? anyway continue...

Thanks for the love, homey...

That verse wasn't bad, but why'd you stop at only six bars??...No offense, it just bothers me when people go over 4 bars and don't stop with at least 8 for a battle or a standard full 12-or-16-bar verse, feel me?

But otherwise, I liked the vocabulary...kicking that knowledge...

02-10-2007, 07:44 AM

Naw if u want o diss u can diss a few more times,damn quit takin it personally,lol, anid if u want a round 2,I'm down, Matter of fact I'll set it up, I ain't scared

**theFRANCHISE** · 02-10-2007, 10:43 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by C.S.

Naw if u want o diss u can diss a few more times,damn quit takin it personally,lol, anid if u want a round 2,I'm down, Matter of fact I'll set it up, I ain't scared

...SET IT UP, SET IT UP! I WANT ANOTHER BATTLE! I'M ITCHING FOR ONE! LOL

Madden · 02-10-2007, 04:49 PM

wack niggas on here use yo imagination open yo ears as i state this declareation i am sick of ga being so fucking racist suspending me from school so i wont get know education and another thing this shit get me aggravated everytime i say a big word honkeys stare in amazement.

try to spit like i was from the north but fo real though fuck honkeys i aint racist but damn they need to get of my nuts at school

02-11-2007, 10:23 AM

**theFRANCHISE** · 02-11-2007, 09:44 PM

Hmm...start off with something new since my thread isn't getting any takers...

It sickens me, the lack of competition in here,
When a cure is what I'm continually wishin' this year,
But listen here, you might wanna open your ears,
When it comes to MC's, there's almost no one I fear
The only ones I'm afraid of are the ones before me,
And all the others after are the ones that bore me,
So before y'all TRY to "school me" with the "lesson" you teach,
Please do me a favor -- try not to put me to sleep...

ausmus · 02-11-2007, 10:35 PM

i got my eyes and my mind set out on this here female
mysterious but she walks like her shit really dont smell
she given me the hottest looks but man i aint shook
she might be something else but I can read her like a book
african ass restin right on that slender white frame
my peers like pancakes but this dude right here always game
girls got a wild side that I aint gonna try and tame but
i'll just keep ridin that ass and she can ride me into fame

but was her name Melina? she look like angelina
stunning eyes, pouty lips, man you shoulda seen'er
on that floor grindin out to funky cold medina
she got moves like she just watched videos by Trina

**theFRANCHISE** · 02-11-2007, 11:08 PM

Hmm...interesting...lemme see if I can play off that...

Yo, I'm peepin' that chick, shorty done caught my eye,
She walked by, I exhaled -- she done caught my sigh,
I know guys who would do anything to get with her,
Even with their boys, just like chicks, they would bicker
I bit my lip as she continued to gaze,
Towards my way, locked eyes for seconds, but seemed days,
I was dazed and confused, but my game's in check,
Just as I'm ready to play, she moved onto WHO next?!?
None other than the brotha whom had just spoke,
I thought to myself that this just had to be a joke,
I waited to be awoken from this laugh of a dream,
But looks like the only one left to be laughing was me
Apparently, dude's game was pretty damn tight,
'Cause the minute I turned right, thought she was gone for the night,
That's alright, 'cause I know that at the end of the day,
Regardless of what HE say, she'll come with ME anyway...

Haha...nice verse, though, ausmus...just thought I'd add a continuation to it since you wanted to tell a story...

Krackerjack · 02-20-2007, 08:45 PM

Uh I'm so bored time to say some random shit
Got people lined up in tandem they weak so they submit
to the rule of a man who is funny like a chapelle skit
KrackerJack so sick he make other rappers sick
stand around me long enough and you end up on some Pneumonia shit
the flow is so cold people who hear it tend to get frostbit
I outwit you people and I am also floodlit
somebody go library it cause I know you didn't get it.

**theFRANCHISE** · 02-20-2007, 10:36 PM

Damn, I'm bored, too...

You sayin' YOU sick? Homey, my flow's contagious,
It'd make other rappers think they need an AIDS test,
"Ageless" is the only adjective to describe,
How "ancient" is opposite of this flow of mine
You'd know to mind the words you say and choose 'em well,
Or what comes out my mouth could cause your brain to swell,
Oh well, any good rappers have a sizeable ego,
But ain't no good rappers outside of ME, though...