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07-22-2008, 02:46 PM
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| malvern digga verse..lol damn u perfect...lol
Ave's style... Alright nigga... You wanted it...
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It should be a sin to be this lazy, take a page out of the Jew's Bible
Then again, he's been reborn anew & idle
as the only murder he committin is overkillin the Avenue's style!!
(Jews were lazy in their worship in the Old Testament at times, idle = lazy; his name is overkill; ties in with sin)
He has to prove he's worthy, he thinks he's average, but I don't trust gays
Wouldn't have dope in his system with a 1/2 ball of yay
I contemplated dropping at his level, but then I'd be like him... just 'O.K.'
(Sword/machete in av; Name is OverKill ... Intials per syllable O.K. = mediocre; yay = coke = dope)
Might as well suffocate himself, he know he can't handle what he's being fed
Two blasts leave his head with more'bounce' than a bobble-head
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07-22-2008, 02:48 PM
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| i admitt kool verse.. far as name play..but nothin 2 shabby..my verse had way more complexity an originality that urs..u just explain alotta shit..i cud do that 2 an you'd realize..
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07-22-2008, 02:52 PM
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| o-yea..u use 2 many fillers 2 set up 4 a punch-line...smh
dis shit didnt really go 2gether u just rhymed words 2 get u to ur punchline: He has to prove he's worthy, he thinks he's average, but I don't trust gays <<<filler Wouldn't have dope in his system with a 1/2 ball of yay
I contemplated dropping at his level, but then I'd be like him... just 'O.K
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07-22-2008, 03:11 PM
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| he aint that bad man...i wouldnt consider that verse, weak alot of creativity in it |
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07-22-2008, 03:17 PM
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| neva said it wuz weak..just he aint perfect...an ive seen better
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07-22-2008, 03:39 PM
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| ave style is like mobfiggaz style...wit all that gay shit in the middle and explaining in shit.
and i thought ppv was bad cuz he used 2 quote?? gyooooodaaaammn. u can't tell if the nigga wanna write a verse or play an RPG. he's a clown and so is choppa 4 hoppin on his dick. im bout 2 end his shit if he makes it past 1st round |
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07-22-2008, 04:43 PM
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| the way this dude was talkin', i thought he was better than that |
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07-22-2008, 04:53 PM
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| I said I'm not a battler. And that was my first keystyle. Using my other style I believe I'm much better, I can drop one of my other ones for that, and knowing text and being able to write it are two different things. I hate the Ave's style though and if you wanted to look that up you coulda found it. They focus too hard on this non-existing 'complexity.' But yeah this was keyed, look at the PLAYED OUT CONCEPT in the 3rd and final bar. Bobble-head, I was reaching over time limit and just went with something played and tried to spin it, but couldn't. I won by KO... but meeeh, not happy with it. As I said, I don't battle nigga.
That verse is weak IMHO. I could break down my own shit and know the problems with it, but its hard to fix it.
And yes I won that battle in my only battle. I was in a bit of an odd mood the night that dude asked me to vote in this tourney, but honestly I thought the talent would have been better.
But this is mad stalker-ish son that you wanna look me up and shit. Word, your riding me a bit hard by trying to find a verse from me... =\.
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07-22-2008, 04:53 PM
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Originally Posted by iPimp ave style is like mobfiggaz style...wit all that gay shit in the middle and explaining in shit.
and i thought ppv was bad cuz he used 2 quote?? gyooooodaaaammn. u can't tell if the nigga wanna write a verse or play an RPG. he's a clown and so is choppa 4 hoppin on his dick. im bout 2 end his shit if he makes it past 1st round | Nigga shut yo ol' Chubby azz up..what u callin' yourself a pimp for, when u spend most ur time online...n talkin to gurls on myspace is not considered fuckin them...u overweight ethernet pimp nigga probably got a perm...lol ol pussy azz nigga
n and i wasnt on his dick, u bitch azz nigga...alotta the shit the said makes sense u 22 on a rap forum...askin niggaz for passwords, n u got over 1000 posts n u on here daily....arguin wit teenagers lol |
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07-22-2008, 04:57 PM
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| | Ether
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Originally Posted by choppaboy [i]Nigga shut yo ol' Chubby azz up..what u callin' yourself a pimp for, when u spend most ur time online...n talkin to gurls on myspace is not considered fuckin them...u overweight ethernet pimp nigga probably got a perm...lol ol pussy azz nigga
n and i wasnt on his dick, u bitch azz nigga...alotta the shit the said makes sense u 22 on a rap forum...askin niggaz for passwords, n u got over 1000 posts n u on here daily....arguin wit teenagers lol | u mad? ya shit still gonna get ended no matter how much you bitch. you non joke catchin silly putty brained "my momma payin 4 my college by suckin dick cuz im 2 dumb 4 a scholarship" ass lol. ya own homeboys be clownin u, u so retarded |
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