$tr8 up

commencing murder.....

in da street he puss so i know dis nigga frontin now,
but i shut em down, logg off, and leave em to run his mouf,
if i heard he put his "arms up" i guess he "dunking now",
dis "kid" aint seen a "big mac" since he wuz up in "Ronalds HOuse",
betta watch out who u f-wit-fam, da next time down aint no helping hands,
imma break his legs-and-hands and leave em n a 'four cast' like da 'weatherman',
prolly some retarded ass kid from da Netherlands,
he like "i luv new york" cuz in da end he dont "have a 'chance'...(hahahaha)
boi ya damn silly, im on course like fan cielings, dis bitch b dissin cuz he want
attention like some spoil ass children,
so keep playing mister know-it-all acting like u over all,
but overall u suck,i make ya drop ya pen like bowling balls,
lez c u brush ya shoulders-off, its to much dirt up on-ya-dawg,
get ready, and watch ya 'set, go', like ya on-ya-mark.(think about a race losa)
c im over-top, like i over-shot-da-roc.(basketball)
now im cutting ya 'time out' u shud gon-and-stop-da-clock,
its not-alot, to get ya heated up like a coffe-pot,
he da police so its like throwing pennys, imma make dis 'copper drop',
he got bullied out, now he "back in" like a parking spot,(damn)
got all da mod's dick n his mouf and i aint know he gargled-cocks.(haha)
stfu wit who u ethered, bitch u came-ova, talkn bout da 'take ova' u taking hova-shots..(im shittin on dis guy)
he lemme shit on em, i wrote 4 bars, he wrote-alot...

its ova iont even want feedback cuz niggaz b hating on dis muh fucka
and dont know rap and shit, (alotta threads have proven dat),
but yea....its ova gawd....fuk wut a nigga say...

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REPRESENTIN "KNIT TIGHT PRODUCTION$" &
"GREEN HOUSE FX"

u say u jordan when he played back then
i think u jordan when he came back again

God of Da HHS

smh boy u got diss deficiency

God of Da HHS

Can I ask u if u a Weezy fan?

$tr8 up

can i ask r u ok???.....lmaoo....and hell naw..fuk weezy...
wayne aint shittin on me like me

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REPRESENTIN "KNIT TIGHT PRODUCTION$" &
"GREEN HOUSE FX"

u say u jordan when he played back then
i think u jordan when he came back again

God of Da HHS

.......................right

theFRANCHISE

So my criticism of $tr8 up's diss?:

I'd consider it hot...if I could read it, like temps on ovens,
Like E-Z Bake or Weezy-made rhymes -- it ain't nothin',
You're sayin' something -- but I can't separate it from the garbage,
Your garbled speech is a swing that missed like you punchin' arm-less
It's harmless when a diss ends up bringing you LESS harm,
So the more you sidestep, the less they're twisting your arm,
The charm in what you wrote was that your pen was evasive,
You avoided all conflict while you really ain't say SHIT...

Haha...just kidding...

In all seriousness, it wasn't bad. I just had to kind of sit there and read it through several times 'cause of all the punctuation and long bars and whatnot...

God of Da HHS

nah but 4real this wasnt all that good. I told u u had skillz but 2 say u shit on me is retarded

™5★Bossman

it was aiight gotta shorten up dem bars mayne it was ok

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